Until today I hadn't heard anything from my new editor(s), and what I heard today was just saying that they didn't reply because they were moving and only recently got their internet back up and running. So sometime soon, I hope to get back to work on The Laurcian. But in the meantime, I've decided to go back over the whole story so far with a fine-toothed comb and thoroughly eliminate any snags or tangles that made it through the first time. No major changes, though. Not until the end of the second chapter, anyway...
No progress on anything else. I've been distracted by school and games.







it's proof of how good both missles and plasma cannons are powerful, but in my opinion of this clip we would have kicked their ass. in that war we would not have been slawtered so badly...if it wasin't for those DAMN sheilds. they cheated! what's happening is that the UNSC has just lost another planet, it is now covered by the covenants. master cheif is the last human on it. he has no chance against the million aliens surrounding him. but, then comes the UNSC's entire fleet to come and rescue him or die trying. they are outnumbered 3 to 1,[not by numbers but by equlity] but they will not give up, they send two pilicans to the planets surface while they take on the covenant armada. master cheif's transport was destroyed now all he can do is fight. 6 tanks, 14 brutes, and 1 mega brute stand between him and the the rescue ships, the only thing to do is charge them streight on and fight them to the death! up above the UNSC fleet which came with 100 ships now only has 20, while the covenant at the begining had 30 now have 20. but the pillicans succeded in rescuing master cheif[HE MADE IT] so they all make the jumb to escape but the last ship before entering sends it's last mega missle [in honor of those who died] towards the capital ship, the bigest ships in the entire fleet, 3 times bigger then the regular sized ships which hold about 80 thousand units. and the capital ship 250 thousand. and then BOOM! don't mess with earth you alien motherfuckers! we will fight you to the death! and will make you Pay!
i've gone overboard with this i know.^_^
but it was so cool.
And, for future reference, please don't swear on my profile or in any of your comments on my stuff.
So, did this happen in one of the games? Or is it a fan-made clip?
fan-made, the guy put pieces from 'halo 3 and the new one 'halo wars' together to form his own story.
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